In the current time of technological advancement; one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given topic asserts that either people should pay tax to government from their hard earned money or not? I am completely disagree with this statement and shall explore the dimensions and assertions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
To begin with, every economy is based on the taxes which play the greatest role in the development of the nation. Moreover, govermment would not be able to help the needy ones and cannot do something for welfare of the society until the humongous amount money. Therefore, taxes are the most suitable way for raising income for the economy. One best epitome of this is that, in the country like India, Many people reluctant to pay tax and due to their irresponsiness; country is at its developing stage. So it is must for everyone who earn money should give some amount of money from their income to the state.
Apart from that, Govrnment also need fund for the construction purposes. Furthermore, It has to build hospitals, schools and various service centres for the welfare of the society. In addition to this, people pay money in the form of tax and that money circulates in the society by distinct ways by the government. For instance, At the time of natural disasters like floods or earthquakes etcetera, govermnent can not only re-repair all the disaster from the saved money which is given by the people but also help the sufferers.
In conclusion, nevertheless, I tend to believe that the economy is only able to grow with the joint collaboration of both public and government. People should understand their responsibility for the nation and pay tax on proper time so that government can utilize it for the welfare purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88815789474 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74403628088 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1218558096 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215152171694 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751536993069 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680698028545 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133172457773 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234672544562 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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