In the current time of technological advancement; one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given topic relates to values. A particular topic asserts that which generation has the more value in their culture; older and younger? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions and assertions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of the argument, there are some people who believe that standard of old people is superior than young ones. They bolster their view point by claiming that old generation have long experience of their life and they have faced various ups and downs. Moreover, they can tackle every problem wisely through their life experience. Apart from that, youngsters do not have much sense to do any work therefore, they are too guided by the old people. For instance, in the joint family, parents or even children take opinions and suggestions from their grandparents because they are wiser enough.
On the flip side, there are some people of different cultures who believe that youth is considered as superior than older ones in terms of values. They believe that in this modern culture, everything has been changed, youngsters are more innovative and creative thinkers along with the latest technicall skills. They can easily tackle any problem because they know how to handle the obstacles. For instance, in the United States of America, the government has given free education to youngsters so they can easily study without any worries.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions, I tend to believe that even youth is the future of every culture and nation however, older people are also a precious asset of the culture. People should give equal respect and value to both generations irrespective of age or gender.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...that standard of old people is superior than young ones. They bolster their view poi...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
... claiming that old generation have long experience of their life and they have faced vario...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as superior 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ve that youth is considered as superior than older ones in terms of values. They bel...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...ve that youth is considered as superior than older ones in terms of values. They bel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1228668942 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56086891479 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2909403003 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158069753821 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558339413018 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643092148394 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10622056957 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679126443996 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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