Financial support has an important role in development of any fields in educational places. As in universities
many students are educating and living in in great cultural atmosphere, thus they need to learn about social activities. I agree with this statement.
first of all Since students live in a public place need to learn about social activities and paly a positive important role in their society. for example: when a freshman
student go to university need to help for joining to new place. in this case current student can share their experiences for new student and help to
them in this way. on the other hand, international students need to familiarize with new society and culture, since many of current students are ready to
work in information team in orientation day, that is a important work for make a good influence on their community.
secondly all students need to live healthy and have a positive mind for best performance in their duties, thus any universities need have a big and modern
sport centers. on the other hand, recent researches shown a meaningful relationship between doing sports and best performance in educational environments.
for example: when I went to university sometimes I went to pool for play water polo, I enjoyed very much when was in pool. after that I had a good feeling and enhance my concentration about my duties.
in conclusion I am hoping every university have a great plan for development sports and social activities equal classes and libraries and their policies lead students for best education and a progressive life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt of any fields in educational places. As in universities many students are ed...
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...ucational places. As in universities many students are educating and living in in...
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... many students are educating and living in in great cultural atmosphere, thus they ne...
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...vities. I agree with this statement. first of all Since students live in a pu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19011406844 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93002233207 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524714828897 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9915582937 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123071295379 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058684926647 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531841321325 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594927831127 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458273407194 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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