Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
Cultural shock for new immigrants has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very of cultural shock through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay on mine I will try to enunciate the options which can reduce the cultural shock for immigrants.
The most prominent reason is language. Moreover, when people go to the other country there native speaks different language which can be hard for the immigrant if he/ she are not aware of. For instance, when people go for shopping and they cannot understand the shopkeeper's language then he might get angry and shout on the person. In addition, it can lead the person to a serious mental health condition as he/she might feel insulted in public.
Continuing to this the immigrants should know the culture and clothes of the country. For example, Indian people wear suits or sarees but in foreign country people wear western dresses. So, it is important for immigrants and natives that both should understand and respect the culture and languages. Furthermore, if people will respect each other than there will not have a problem of cultural shock.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of cultural shock. I would like to conclude that this serious problem can be solved by taking some steps before going to another country such as by knowing the culture, language and customs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shopkeepers'' or 'shopkeeper's'?
Suggestion: shopkeepers'; shopkeeper's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he/she might feel insulted in public. Continuing to this the immigrants should...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01503759398 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60815569227 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2922904964 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176257026621 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678214516666 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550492035036 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106754111437 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558361693663 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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