Cultural shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
The substantial influence of cultural shock has sparked the controversy over recent years. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about traditions of the new countries will be burden for few migrants. This essay will elaborate the problem faced by new immigrants and possible solution to overcome the problem.
At the outset, there are myriads of problems for migrants in new country, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that culture changeover. Indeed, people from countries like India will feel significant changes in traditions of western countries. As an illustration, Indians will feel uneasy with social drinks habits of ladies in the occasions. Therefore, few immigrants will definitely experience shock in culture of new country.
On the other hand, some people believe it is possible to overcome such problems easily, but most predominant one lies in the fact that socialism. Furthermore, people need to participate in parties or functions organized by their colleagues in new country will eliminate this problem. For instance, the social parties will helps migrants to get know about the culture of countries by exchanging conversations with his friends. Eventually, the immigrants will overcome the cultural shock towards the new country.
In summary, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that major concern of migrants are traditions and it can be avoided by social relationships. In my opinion, I would strongly recommend that people who feel cultural difference should involve in general conversations with coworkers and get know about it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
.... For instance, the social parties will helps migrants to get know about the culture ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in general, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49593495935 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90976279879 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8932720694 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213136826252 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831870296552 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676607519112 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136597735988 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618075732995 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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