Governments and international organizations are concerned over the global problems. What do you think is the biggest issue? Why do you think so and what solutions you will provide?
The substantial influence of global issues has sparked the controversy over recent years. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the major global problems are climate change or artificial intelligence. This essay will elaborate the both of the problems and thus will lead a logical solution.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons why climate change is become an issue, but the most conspicuous stems from the fact that it affects the environment badly across the countries. In addition, economically dependent on these countries will also be affected. As an illustration, environmental changes are reported bad and create massive problem to the world. Because of this reasons, governments and industries should come forward for this problem on a serious note and take appropriate measurements to environment.
Nevertheless, some people adopt and opposing view and tend to believe that artificial intelligence is also a huge world problem. Furthermore, artificial intelligence would make world jobless for many peoples. For instance, many industries will prefer computer based systems for their work instead of humans because people tend commit mistakes but computers are not. For this reason, automation process across the global will be major impact on everywhere.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that climate effects and computer machines are the major problems in the world. In my opinion, I would propose these solutions they are forest maintenance will tolerate climate changes and appropriate usage of computer machines will not people go jobless.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...assive problem to the world. Because of this reasons, governments and industries sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55691056911 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89605832306 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5882252214 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.069736864854 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281920206599 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277694782095 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476992804111 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237809509698 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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