Teachers play a crucial role in the development of a personality of every human being. Moreover, most of the children choose their role model among the school’s teachers. Morden society values enough the labour of teacher and understands the importance of it. Speaking personally, I disagree with the statement that the teacher’s labour isn’t appreciated enough, and I will reinforce my point of view by providing several examples.
First of all, most of the developing countries increase the teacher’s salary. Just to mention a novel Russian policy which supports young teachers and gives them an opportunity to participate in international practice or study abroad. Moreover, the government understands the most significant factor, which influences the improvement of the education, is the qualified teachers. Therefore, by organizing this international practice or by praising the best teacher, the government brings tremendous benefit to the development of teacher’s education.
In the second place, previously, the education system was different. No doubts, if we are talking about Russia, that the education was better in some ways, but it doesn’t mean that teachers were more valued by society. In order to see this point clearly, I will give a good example from my personal experience. When I was exchanging the school experience with my mother, she told that during her school years a lot of teachers had left their jobs because of the principal or parents pressure. This pressure was because of the misunderstanding between a student and a teacher which led to the conflict. In the light of the above, I daresay that the same occasions are presented in the nowadays schools. However, I suppose that today students became more tolerate concerning their demeanour.
Finally, there are numerous people around me who admire their teachers and still visit them every year at the school. Likewise, I have a good tradition to visit my chemistry teacher every summer holiday. I ween that the future students will keep this tradition alive and will keep in touch with their teachers as well.
To recapitulate, there are a lot of obvious examples of how different people appreciated and valued their teachers. I believe that no matter what year is it, people still would be respectful to their teachers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well, i suppose, no doubt, talking about, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0344371174 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2639688634 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134933490483 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407039361659 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337433665868 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764797397372 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233447183507 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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