In many country an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food . it is therefore necessary for government to improve higher taxes on this kind of food . to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Food shelter and clothes are the basic needs of human beings in this modern word . presently, in some nations an increasing number of masses suffering from health hazards as a causes of fast food . thus, it is responsible of government to improve taxes on fast food . here , I am decord with given statement .
There are manifold points to share up my point of view. First and foremost, In this modern era youngsters choose to eat junk food rather than domestic food . thence , it satisfy the taste of youngsters . government to impose taxes on continental food. As a result , it is cause of dissatisfaction. Moreover, by imposing taxes on fast food . the effect small food outlet .they do not earn bread and butter . so that , there is no need to impose taxes on oil food . furthermore, there many fast food companies in country such as , KFC , Canadian , McDonald's, dominous, so on. If government imposed the taxes on junk food . the company is closed . adding to it , the busiest people do not have enough time to cook and eating traditional food. It can be depend on fast food . junk food save the precious time of busiest people . so that there is no need of impose taxes on continental food.
Numerous point can be mentioned to accord with given statement , youngsters consum excessive amount of fast food it is responsible for health effects such as, blood sugar, diabetes, obesity so on. Apart from it, the fast food leads to distinct the cultural value . nowadays, people are fully depend on fast food rather than domestic food .It imposed the tax on the fast food and save us traditional food or heritage food .
To recapitulate, there should be less consume of fast food and prevent from health disease . government should tax on fast food .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80602006689 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62468933073 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508361204013 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1823750404 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.875 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4583333333 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 5.01903807615 976% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381556083447 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130929154825 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814724365932 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267290151912 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300692662412 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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