In general, I think this statement has both sides we can approve or reject it, it's really dependent on the pupil age. in my view it's OK for the matured students how can identify the porns and cons of any belives but, it can harmful for students at lower ages such as elementary school students.
First, the social and especially political views of teacher can distract the children believes about their surrounding events and finally lead to their panic. On the other hand, these views can be helpful for students at colleges so they can barrel the burden of social and political problems and also they have many concerns about their society. For example in Iran, the professors viewpoints had a significant importance in the victory of the revolution.
The political and social opinions of the teacher can direct the pure mentality of the childrens to the specific region where its creditability is questionable. However the validity of the teacher's political or social views is unclear at first so, the matured students can debate on them and finally reach to the true viewpoints. In supporting of this argument we can mention to the unpublished law in the academic classes in Iran, "there isn't any predictable results, the results gained by the debates".
Also the political or social statements in any irrelevant classes can cause the teacher loses the time of the class and so he cannot govern the nessesary contents of the course in all of the grades.
With the above statements I can conclude, illustration of teacher's social and political views has boths negative and positive effects on the students in relation with their age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, for example, i think, in general, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01086956522 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.744155635 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7562605551 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 138.3 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.45110844103 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19507567425 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907911356524 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622275356866 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127520927447 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613811727941 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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