The table gives information about the average of income at a small restaurant in a particular week of October 7-13 in a downtown business district. Overall, it is clear that the sales of restaurant at lunch and dinner experienced downward trend from monday to sunday. Also, the figure for revenue of dinner far more than lunch.
As can be see from the graph that the lunch sales of restaurant was highest on wednesday and was lowest on sunday, at 2595 dollar and 1550 dollar respectively. Apart from thursday, the income from lunch increase gradually from monday to wednesday by 195 dollar. However, there was a remarkably decrease to 2375 dollar in the lunch sales on thursday, which was followed by a significantly rise to 2500 on Friday. Meanwhile, the lunch sales in restaurant on the weekend: saturday and sunday became impressively lower than days of week.
About the dinner sales, the income of restaurant was highest on tuesday and was lowest on sunday, to 3850 dollar and 2450 dollar respectively. However, there was a fluctuation in the income of restaurant from monday to friday. The sales from monday to tuesday increased gradually by 227 dollar, which followed was by a impressively decrease on Wednesday, then there was a dramatically increase on Friday from 3445 to 4350. In contrast, the revenue of dinner still witnessed significantly lower than another days of week.
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...raph that the lunch sales of restaurant was highest on wednesday and was lowest on sunday, ...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...restaurant was highest on wednesday and was lowest on sunday, at 2595 dollar and 1550 doll...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...esday and was lowest on sunday, at 2595 dollar and 1550 dollar respectively. Apart fro...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...west on sunday, at 2595 dollar and 1550 dollar respectively. Apart from thursday, the ...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...adually from monday to wednesday by 195 dollar. However, there was a remarkably decrea...
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Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('remarkably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...esday by 195 dollar. However, there was a remarkably decrease to 2375 dollar in the lunch sales on th...
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Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...there was a remarkably decrease to 2375 dollar in the lunch sales on thursday, which w...
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Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
...ales on thursday, which was followed by a significantly rise to 2500 on Friday. Meanwhile, the lunch...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
... dinner sales, the income of restaurant was highest on tuesday and was lowest on sunday, to...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...f restaurant was highest on tuesday and was lowest on sunday, to 3850 dollar and 2450 doll...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...esday and was lowest on sunday, to 3850 dollar and 2450 dollar respectively. However, ...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...west on sunday, to 3850 dollar and 2450 dollar respectively. However, there was a fluc...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...y to tuesday increased gradually by 227 dollar, which followed was by a impressively d...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ly by 227 dollar, which followed was by a impressively decrease on Wednesday, the...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('impressively') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...ly by 227 dollar, which followed was by a impressively decrease on Wednesday, then there was a dramatic...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...y decrease on Wednesday, then there was a dramatically increase on Friday from 3445 to 4350. In contras...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, then, while, apart from, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02164502165 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81535757301 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450216450216 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8488088104 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.454545455 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116507780606 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594194056152 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800318676048 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109079785058 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844953844695 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.