The table illustrates the data of lunch and dinner at a restaurant with downtown business from 7th to 13th October. Overall, it is clearly seen from the data that the dinner amount was more than that of lunch spent during the week.
Looking at the data in more detail, we can see that the most dramatic rise was on Wednesday, of around $2600. Then, the amount slightly declined on Friday into $2500. Later on the weekend, unfortunately, the sales was seen for a general decrease and remained quite steady on the weekend. On Saturday the sales volume dropped to less than $2000, and even declined into only $1550 on Sunday afternoon.
Turning to look at dinner sales, the average amount on the weekdays was estimated to be $3500, until on Friday, it reached the peak to nearly $4000. Similarly, the figure continuously climbed into $2900 on Saturday thus, only received of less than $2500 on Sunday night.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, similarly, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70063694268 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39656400016 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7404586097 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.25 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814622292157 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371002410621 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550192450329 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567459643827 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035429557841 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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