The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age groups full. Describe the information in the table and make comparison where appropriate.
The provided tabular chart reveals information about internet usage in six categories by seven age groups. The data is measured in per centum it is clearly presented in the layout.
Overall, it is evident that all age group people uses internet widely to get news; while, least internet was consumed for downloads and for searching people.
It can be seen that, except researching products, teenagers were using most of the internet data on online games; whereas, people of age groups 20-40 had been spending data on product research. But, if we concentrate on least usage, teenagers barely research products and 20-40 age group people use least internet on searching people.
In addition to this, the grown up people also used data mainly for product research and in getting news as well; but, minimum on downloads. Internet on other activities such as; online games, buying a product and for searching people was approximately equally used by all age groups.
- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good while others believe this is a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it is happening? It is negative or positive development. 61
- The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by personal department at major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows favtors affecting their work performance. 56
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. 61
- A recent survey shows the number of people traveling through London's underground station boarding Victoria Terminal at different times of the day. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
... uses internet widely to get news; while, least internet was consumed for downloads and...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'use the least'.
Suggestion: use the least
...rch products and 20-40 age group people use least internet on searching people. In add...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13924050633 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53253149056 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1178773009 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176309856757 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908729414141 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660066605704 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118221256277 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362224328332 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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