do you agree or disagree with the following statement? because of the world changing so quickly. people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
that technology plays an important role in our life is an undeniable fact. Should people realize the advantages of world-changing in their life, they will ponder world changing much more scrupulously. I agree with world-changing. this issue has recently been the topic of debate among experts.
I believe that world-changing makes our life better than past, and we have not only relaxing in our life but also using of new technologies. To begin with, I have a friend who he lives in Germany. his mother could not see him for some years whenever using od internet spread among people, she can see her boy by skype or other programs. therefore word changing is both good and useful in our life. the second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that communication is the most important part of our life. new technologies make our life suitable. there online shopping centers that we can buy what we need every time. once, I need a mobile charger at midnight and I used the internet in order to buy a charger. hence, word changing is really good. The last but not the least, we can solve many problems by using new creators, for instance, we can travel anywhere we need.
having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective, because I believe that everything has two sides. as well, changing of the world get us to talk with our family little and respectful decrease among people.
by taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue, underestimating the advantages of new creates in our life is not logical. attending to this issue meticulously contributes to world-changing is good, and can improve several aspects of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8756182382 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2532345194 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0436414222307 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226764496748 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564834858792 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341812568847 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166130276524 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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