Some people think that one should plan detailed activities for their leisure time, others disagree with that. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Leisure time plays a pivotal role in physical and mental well-being of an individual. Some people think that it should be properly planned since this helps in optimum utilization of time. Others believe it should be randomly allocated so that people can explore diverse activities and rejuvenate themselves. I agree with the former view.
A well-planned schedule of leisure activities ensures efficient utilization of time. Firstly, a person can benefit from a leisure activity only if sufficient energy is devoted to it for a long period of time. For instance, parents these days prefer that their children should learn a foreign language, a musical instrument or a professional sport during free time instead of watching television or playing a game. This requires regular commitment and dedication which are possible only through proper planning of leisure activities.
On the flip side, leisure activities can be a source of creativity and rejuvenation only if they are unplanned. Various studies have proved that leisure activities are meant to break the cycle of monotony and organized work. If these activities are planned and organized to achieve certain goals, they will never refresh themselves for greater productivity in work. Some corporations such as Google have created play areas within their offices where employees can do random activities to get a break from monotony of professional work.
in conclusion, I think a person should organize his leisure time to achieve better results. Leisure time is not meant for rejuvenation; however, to carry out certain non-professional and productive activities. An engineer, for instance, should plan about learning painting so that he can develop his personality. Lack of planning will prevent this development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to paint'.
Suggestion: to paint
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47272727273 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98076699875 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2476707401 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30042712154 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102748071292 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436531983492 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189824875457 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465129877252 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.