It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?
Over the past few years, in many countries, it is surveyed that there are not enough students, who choose to study science subjects, such as maths, chemistry, physics. In my opinion, that problem has happened by some causes, and its effects on society is quite significant.
As far as I know there are some causes to lead that problem. Firstly, many students do not like the science subjects because of their difficulty. Even most students get lower points than other subjects. Secondly, students often feel hard to use knowledge about science subjects into their life. Thirdly, most students want to buy more and more money. But students, who choose these subjects, often work to relate research science. They have to spend much time in researching at lab, but they can not become the rich.
Having said that not enough students are choosing to study science subjects affect to some important fields on society. For instance, society will lack scientist who improve old methods and create new methods, which increase productivity. Above all, it is an unbalance about job. It clearly realises that there are the number of redundant social students compare with the need of society.
In conclusion, we should solve that problem seriously. The government should pay high salary for scientists. Furthermore, teachers, who teach science subjects, have to change their educational method.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ffects on society is quite significant. As far as I know there are some causes to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19196428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55727986839 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9974974607 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6875 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259754516227 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697382517283 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610129776707 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145252479503 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603543422155 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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