Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Companies should pay for employees to get a university degree.
There is no doubt that employees with college level education would always be valuable assets to their employers. Hence, some people propose that companies should cover the expense of the higher education for their recruits for their own benefits. Although the value of a well-educated worker is undeniable, I disagree that companies should pay for employees’ university tuition.
My first reason is that, covering the cost of employees’ university education is a big risk for a company. As commercial organizations, companies pay a lot of attention to various potential risks to maintain healthy and smooth operation. While employees usually perform better with university degrees than those who have not, thanks to their further study and training, it also comes with great financial cost. The problem is, after employees acquire the degree they desire with the support from their company, there is no guarantee that these employees will stay, unless they are forced by signed agreements that will restrict their future options, which are usually not favored by employees and may even create rifts between two parties if it is not treated carefully. Therefore, paying for employees’ university degree is a risky move that company should try to avoid.
Secondly, apart from the risk, companies have on obligation to cover employees’ education. On the contrary, it is the employees themselves who are responsible for their personal development. University degrees are signs of one’s achievements in specific fields, regardless of whether the result would serve his employer or not. Thus, employees should try to take the responsibility of their own self-improvement rather than waiting for their companies’ sponsorship. For example, an application programmer can choose to further his study in psychology for his own personal interest. As for his employer, there is no reason to support him financially because psychology is not even remotely related to his duty. As a result, to pay the tuition by himself is a more reasonable and practical choice than trying to convince his boss to cover the bill for him.
In conclusion, companies should not cover the expense of employees’ university education due to the risk such action can bring. Instead, employees should pay for their own degree, since in this way, they would have more freedom in their own development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as for, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1373.03311258 148% => OK
No of words: 375.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42666666667 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06687999258 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 419.366225166 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.25165562914 639% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7799788124 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.705882353 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06452816374 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297733873486 0.272083759551 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117522126685 0.0996497079465 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730700580059 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218237022377 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394697745917 0.0443174109184 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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