Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Ever since the great advance of modern science and technology, the pace of development of every aspect of the world has been increasing. Because of such rapid change, some people hold the opinion that life nowadays is less happy and satisfying than in the past. However, I find such statement hardly convincing. In fact, I believe people living at present are more joyful than before.
First of all, modern life includes various kinds of entertainment for people to enjoy. This is very significant, considering that entertainment is the center part of people’s leisure time. If people lack methods of entertainment, pressure from work and life will add up and they will have no way to release these stresses. Nevertheless, thanks the development of entertainment industry, as well as high-tech amusement equipment and devices, different people all have a seemingly unlimited number of options to choose from to meet their individual demand and taste, so they are able to relieve themselves however they see fit. For instance, people form the past, who loved movies, didn’t have the luxury to pick what they wanted to watch. Instead, what were available in a few local cinemas were all they might have. On the contrary, due to the expansion of movie industry and the growth of online streaming service, people can not only enjoy various films with extraordinary hardware support in a near theater, but also have access to their favourite movies online, regardless of time and place.
In addition to entertainment, people in the modern society also live healthier than in the past. There is no doubt that health is one of the key elements leading to a pleasing life, and people who live now have a huge advantage over the previous generation. To be more specific, there are more medical facilities and more advanced medicine to keep people away from the suffering of disease and illness. This is due to the fast development of science, particularly biology and medical science, which contributes to people’s understanding towards their own body. As a result, people with critical condition have a better chance to survive, or even recover from it fully without relying on sheer luck. Instead, they depend on detailed, science-based therapy and treatment, supported by knowledgeable doctors and high-end medical equipment.
All in all, those who live at present are happier and more content than those that lived in the past, for today, there are more entertainment methods and better health support. I believe life will continue to be enjoyable, if not better, in the future.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Companies should pay for employees to get a university degree. 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14657210402 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84366210445 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569739952719 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.965232459 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.578947368 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219789781552 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657117334176 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458324367524 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131875151228 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513226194438 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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