You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
· Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
· Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
· Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to you in regards to apply for leave in order to study for the exams for my post-qualification.
As you know, I am attending the evening classes for post graduate degree in construction management, I am eager to complete my studies this year. This is my last semester and I would not be able to continue my studies because my enrollment will be cancelled after this semester according to the university’s policy. I have been working nine hours a day, six days a week and it has been very difficult to cope up with exams along with the job. I would request you to grant me five days leave the next week so that I would be in a better position to prepare myself for the upcoming exams.
When I will be back from the post-graduation assessments, I would be able to concentrate more on my work and would try to give extra time to meet my deadlines in project deliverables. This degree will definitely help the company also to boost its management expertise so my achievement will be worthwhile for the company as well.
Looking forward to receive your response.
Regards
Huma Mohiuddin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to you in regards to apply ...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ar Mr. Brown, I am writing to you in regards to apply for leave in order to study for t...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the exams for my post-qualification. As you know, I am attending the evening ...
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Line 8, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be worthwhile for the company as well. Looking forward to receive your response...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...any as well. Looking forward to receive your response. Regards ...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to receive your response. Regards Huma Mohiuddin
^^^
Line 18, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive your response. Regards Huma Mohiuddin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98938120687 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5402907358 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21190900889 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843117077079 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631405233654 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135442809271 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638968736294 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.