It is undoubtedly the case that modernization, which is also affecting the society adversely. Due to this complex world, people are buzy in their work and do not give full attention to their health. Through this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this, and suggest some of the proactive measures which individuals should implement to curb this problem.
To begin with, In this modern world, everybody is running behind the money ruthlessly. People want to earn more and more, therefore, they do jobs all the day in order to fulfill their needs. Moreover, they do not spend time doing exercises to keep their mind and soul calm. This has led them to become the prey of various diseases. However, one option has to be to find some time for themselves to do little bit exercises within a day. For instance, people should make schedule of whole day and they have to follow it properly so that, they probably be able to manage their work and health.
Apart from that, food disorder is also the significant factor of health problems and laziness. In the past era, people used to eat healthy food and they were fit and fine. However, people of this era have to face number of health problems due to the chemicals which are found in the food materials. Nowadays, from vegetables to junk food, everything is made with the mixture of chemical compounds. Thus, people of this era are not fit as well as earlier. One good solution for this would be that government should restrict and ban such industries and factories which use the chemicals in raw food, over the limit. People should also be aware of these toxic foods and prepare healthy food for them in their food instead of eating food from outside.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worsewhile , it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. This could probably be solved by the people themselves as well as by government. People should understand the importance of their health and spend some time to make themselves fit, otherwise tgey could face out various heath hazards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44282750769 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516304347826 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9418987476 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234225521754 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822281173845 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648919174378 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157522247498 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368685785152 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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