With increasing technological advancement, usage of internet has become a mandatory need. With internet connectivity, social media is very popular among people of all age group, either it be school going kids or retired people. Some people are even not able to make a difference between the content they are posting on social platforms. Everything has its own pro and cons which has its impact on society at macro level. We will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media in depth and will also evaluate if advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Social media is a powerful source with the help of which information can be delivered to huge public with the help of one post. Nowadays, with the help of social media various causes are tapped and awareness is created. We have seen various videos related to women empowerment, domestic violence, Child abuse etc on Facebook, twitter and these videos had created a great impact on our mind and have created value. Companies are also advertising their products on social media by linking it to a cause and all the age groups are active on social media and target market can be easily segmented. Social media helps us to stay connected with friends and also help us to stay tuned to updates happening around.
Social media is a harmful platform as well. People are posting lavish photos with luxury backgrounds on Facebook, Instagram just to show off. Various fake ids are also created on Facebook with same photos as the actual once. Social media is used by registering complaints via twitter, various customers are misusing this to shed money from companies as a complaint on social media has a direct impact on the brand image of the company. Stalkers stalk various profile on facebook according to the information posted on profile and then it results in kidnapping, harassing or love friendships.
Most Teenagers post all track of their location via check-ins, due to which there every follower on social media is aware about there whereabouts and it is very dangerous.
To Recapitulate, Social media is a great source of information and can help various lives. However, extra cautions are to be taken while posting information on social media, or according to sensitivity of information, it can be set as private or only friends rather than public. According to me advantages of social media are way more than disadvantages. Various sessions can be added as part of school curriculum to guide students about pros and cons of social media so they can be careful while hitting enter for posting information.
- It is believed those who have satisfaction in life are more peaceful and successful in life.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea? 56
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.How true do you think this statement is?What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars? 73
- You will move to a city for work.You know some people who live there.Tell them for help finding accommodationTell them where you would like to liveTell them the type of place you are looking for. 73
- employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree 56
- You will move to a city for work.You know some people who live there.Tell them for help finding accommodationTell them where you would like to liveTell them the type of place you are looking for. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...mong people of all age group, either it be school going kids or retired people. So...
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Line 3, column 682, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'update'.
Suggestion: update
...iends and also help us to stay tuned to updates happening around. Social media is a ...
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Line 8, column 280, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ate or only friends rather than public. According to me advantages of social media are way more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05373831776 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74412779531 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.120792491 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.15 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387546978078 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13798628065 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955995333818 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226100766947 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507142612428 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.