Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my decision to discontinue the course for which I had enrolled with you three months ago. As you might know, I had joined fir six months certificate course to get training fir risk management. Unfortunately, I cannot carry on with it for some time.
Precisely, the reason for this is my hectic schedule and work expectations of my employer at my current work place. I work as a Project Manager in Tesco company and a plan for a new project is recently launched by our management. The set deadline for the completion of the project is by the end of this year. So, being in the main position, I have almost full responsibility on me to make it possible. Therefore, my job would be quite demanding, and may be, I have to work for extra hours.
Besides this, I wanted to consult you whether I can continue with the same fees which I have paid fully for the respective course, If I wish to, in the future. If not, can I get the refund for my payment as I am leaving the training in between. Please inform me about both the options, so that I can make a choice. Honestly speaking, I was really enjoying my training, but sadly, I can not devote my time to it.
Please accept my cancellation of the enrolment and do reply me whenever possible. I appreciate your consideration showed towards me while providing training.
Hope to join you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king, I was really enjoying my training, but sadly, I can not devote my time to i...
^^
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to join you soon. Yours faithfully, Mark
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, honestly, if, may, really, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56923076923 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74579829631 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3573840506 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185914519157 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608285282318 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555542169042 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106513534463 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555165723131 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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