Well, It is an undeniable fact that human beings try to replicate each other in context to fashion sense, life style and acquiring materialistic things. There are numerous reasons behind this phenomenon which encourage folks to get attracted by the choices of other individuals.
The first and foremost viewpoint is that a man is a social creature and his way of living is definitely affected by the surroundings he/she is residing in. Thus, It is quite natural that his taste for everything will be influenced by the currents trends adopted by others. What becomes vogue, catches one's eyes and pe...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
... copy his look or wardrobe. Most of the times consumer goods and fashion trends are p...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... termed as copy cats as it depends upon ones affordability and liking of a particula...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n other peoples way of living and try to imitate it. But still there are except...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s way of living and try to imitate it. But still there are exceptions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93307086614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68615039244 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1202639717 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20667107468 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618170199219 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452448390277 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106851816789 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420320263887 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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