Life is full of uncertainty and there is nothing constant. Nowadays, spend life by doing same jobs, professions and businesses is deem by majority of the people. By contrast, other recken thet we should change things as changes are good. Here, i will explicate my point of view and account for both sides with my on perception in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with the vindiccation which can be put down to support the former view. First and the foremost, folks who prefer to do same things in life can obtain the depth knowledge of the work because theye will do same work time and again which make them perfect for particular work. Consequently, they can start their own work( business) and earn a great amount of money, they may have not to face any obstacle as they have a wonderful experience of many years.
Moving further, a plethora of points can be mentioned in the side of letter view. Initially, changes in life ansures the overall development of messes. To demonstrate, they do every type of work and spend their time on thet, which helps them in overall improvement. Moreover, people who like to change their work time to time become brave as they touch the every type of work, which gives them the information about the work and then,they come to know about the risk of work. Ultimately, it helps human beings in their overall development.
According to me, letter point of view is right and it has also more pros than former.
To recapitulation, changes are indispensable for the overall development. Masses should change things because life is full of uncertainty and therefore, we should be prepared to cope up with the problems of life.
Sir. Please can you tell me
Sir. Please can you tell me what I should do for getting higher bands in IELTS exam.
Look at those warning
Look at those warning messages:
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => less than average
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
it means the main issues are related to words.
1. it has some duplicated words, like: 'work'
2. try not to use pronouns as subjects of sentences. like: 'they'. look:
because
they will do same work time and again which make them perfect for particular work. Consequently,
they can start their own work( business) and earn a great amount of money,
they may have not to face any obstacle as
they have a wonderful experience of many years.
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you have other issues in Grammar, but not serious.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deemed'.
Suggestion: deemed
...ame jobs, professions and businesses is deem by majority of the people. By contrast,...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hange things as changes are good. Here, i will explicate my point of view and acc...
^
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... the information about the work and then,they come to know about the risk of work. Ul...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n beings in their overall development. According to me, letter point of view is...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...eings in their overall development. According to me, letter point of view is right and it h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80487804878 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64505144574 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1926688754 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176269336742 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058847445429 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413643990207 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945788207389 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440576514297 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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