Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Life is uncertain,nothing in this world remain constant.Everything changes with the passage of time and the change may be positive or it may be negative,one has to be ready for the change. In addition to this some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change while others presume that change is always a good thing.
First and the foremost,change is the integral part of life,it is within the nature.It has been seen that in every field change occurs drastically over the years and most of them were too good to accept while others were rampant enough to cause des...
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nothing in this world remain constant.
nothing in this world remains constant.
and this kind of thinking hinder them
and this kind of thinking hinders them
statics show that the people
statistics shows that the people
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Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 490 350
No. of Characters: 2267 1500
No. of Different Words: 229 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.705 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.627 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.371 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.704 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.568 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5