Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your housel flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter,
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologize
• describe what action you will take
Dear Ms. Shaheen,
I am writing in response to your letter I have received last Saturday for the nuisance due to the noise produced in our home.
I am very sorry to hear that you and your family were disturbed and the noise generated has made you all deprived of sleep for the last one week. Actually, my kitchen and one washroom have been under renovation and it is advised by the plumber and technicians to fully replace the old pipes and connections with the new ones because of the leakages and they are deteriorating our home and other appliances. I apologize for not considering your situation at the moment. This condition will prevail for two more days and as soon as the work finishes, you will not hear this noise again. I will make sure the work does not continue at night time so that you all can sleep well.
I assure you this will not happen again and will not give you a chance to complain in the future.
Regards
Huma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-07 | Huma Mohiuddin | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 676, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht time so that you all can sleep well. I assure you this will not happen again ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50289017341 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36371662215 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8177705325 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30355313725 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123899278805 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083272037872 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205760802121 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356694813979 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.