You have just read a book and found it useful. write a letter to your friend:
• Tell her/him about the book
• Explain her/him why it is useful
• Suggest how she/he can have it.
Dear Shiva,
Do you remember our last intense discussion on basics of investment? Well, I think, I found a perfect book, which provides easy to understand language and fundamentals of investment for beginner.
The tile of the book is The Investopedia 101 and the book is written by renowned businessman Warren Buffet. It is his life’s work because it contain real life example from his journey from rag to rich that is just by investing wisely.
The book clearly describes all the strategies to bear in my mind before jumping in to investment, which is quite beneficial for novice. It also has collection of outstanding algorithm to predict the rise and fall of the market, which will be useful throughout the life. Why don’t you give it a try? It can boost your career as a successful investor.
You can get this book almost everywhere as it is considered as some sort of bible in business. However, the cheapest copy is available on Amazon, which provides, along with book, CD material for free.
I hope you like the book and don’t forget to share your thoughts once you finish it.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
.... It is his life's work because it contain real life example from his journey from...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your career as a successful investor. You can get this book almost everywhere ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, i think, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9067357513 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7560286363 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8197479279 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181393344055 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626941778454 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042745869723 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100511469233 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279834164683 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.