Your friend invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. Write a letter and cover the following points:•Thank him/her and tell about the meal you enjoyed the most.•How you felt meeting your friend's family.•What else you liked about thi

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Your friend invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. Write a letter and cover the following points:
• Thank him/her and tell about the meal you enjoyed the most.
• How you felt meeting your friend's family.
• What else you liked about this visit.
• Inviting them to your home and and tell him/her about transportation arrangements.

Dear Mohit,

How are you doing? I was going through old photographs and I came across the pictures of our last Christmas together at your house. It was the most delicious food I had in ages and I couldn’t thank you enough for that.

It is very difficult to find authentic Asian food in Toronto but I must say the meal, which was prepared by your mom has changed my perspective, especially chicken Tikka, which I enjoyed the most. Your mom has always been very kind and generous to me, it was lovely meeting her after ages, and she hasn’t grown old a bit.

In addition, the decoration of house was very impressive; it must have cost a fortune to design such a beautiful house. I really had a great time, especially when I was feeling alone in holidays season, it made me feel at home, which I was missing a lot.

Nevertheless, allow me to host your whole family at lunch on Diwali, which is very auspicious festival in my culture. Don’t worry about the transport, your home is on my way to work, I’ll pick up children and your mother. You can take direct metro from Delhi station, which should get you directly near my house.

Thanks again and I hope to see you soon.

Best wishes,
Sandip

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, as to, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58181818182 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5286621426 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2960533942 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236551895378 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883451710887 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648467026586 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133851230364 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680219095758 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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