Title: You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party.
You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.Write a letter to
your neighbour.
In your letterintroduce yourself
describe your plans for the
party
invite your neighbour to come
Letter Writing 150 words
Dear Jim,
My name is Hari and I have recently moved to the flat next to yours. I am writing to you with regards to the house warming party that I am planning to have on 22nd August at my residence.
Let me tell you a bit more about the party. I have just finished graduating from Univeristy and this is will be first attempt at living alone, and hence this is a big move in my life. So, I am planning to invite some of my family and friends to a party to celebrate my achievement. We are planning to have a karoake night together and I am worried that it can get a bit loud with the celebrations.
The party is planned to start at 5:00 PM and we will hope to end it by 11:00 PM. I really hope that we will not become too noisy and cause any disturbance. It would be great if you could in fact join the party and it will be a great opportunity to know a more about you and be part of the celebrations.
Please do let me know if this will be of any inconvenience and I will try to make alternative arrangements. I hope to see you at the party.
Thanks
Hari
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- Title: You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party.You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.Write a letter toyour neighbour. In your letterintroduce yourselfdescribe your plans for thepartyinvite your neighbour to 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, really, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03271028037 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48858429532 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.188013 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117974745192 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480573587683 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348018274698 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773020278227 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277807815393 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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