You want to spend your holidays in the country outside India where your friend resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter, write:
● Where and when you want to spend holidays
● Why you want to visit there
● When you are planning to visit
Dear Janice,
Hope you are doing well. I was really happy seeing your latest pictures of your Grad walk on your Instagram wall. It seems like you are happy and welcoming the upcoming challenges.
I was quite thrilled to tell you that I am planning to visit you and spend my holidays In Toronto. Well, you know that I was really occupied all the time for last 6 months with my project. At last, it came to an end and we are going to implement it on September.
I feel like exhausted every other day as I am spending lot of time with laptop. So, I am planning to take a small break of two weeks from work right after the project go live. You already know that Niagara Lake and Niagara falls are there in my bucket list to visit and recently I am seeing many blogs on Toronto City tour and shopping. I am quite excited to shop in Toronto and enjoy the city.
I am planning to book my ticket for September 30th, so I will be arriving on October 1st Evening. Also, you let me know if you have any busy schedule in that time, so I can postpone my visit to other week. Please do a check and keep a note of good places to visit in the city, so that we can cover almost all places in the city. I will look forward to your reply. I am waiting to see you soon.
Cheers,
Gowthami.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-03-12 | deepaksharma69 | 73 | view |
| 2018-08-10 | GowthamiTirakala | 87 | view |
- you recently lost your driving license and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.•How important the license is to you•Asking how he/she found it•Saying how you would love to thank him/her 73
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 85
- Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.write a letter to the local council. In your lettergive details of how you and your friends or family use the centreexplain why the sports and leisu 73
- You want to spend your holidays in the country outside India where your friend resides Write a letter to your friend and in your letter write Where and when you want to spend holidays Why you want to visit there When you are planning to visit 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09561752988 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13738986188 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0905436888 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24188069114 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797242533686 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764870517139 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16238018629 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632402607203 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.