Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing.
Explain where, when and why.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to publish an advertisement about the global environment conservation meet organized by our NetGeo NGO team on upcoming weekend.
We have selected the community hall in city center as a venue for the event, which will lasts for two days, starting from Saturday 9 am. There are actually two parts of the whole ceremony, second one, which is tree plantation is held at the barren ground on North-East Street. Since it is in the center, accessibility by transport should not be any problem and most people can attend it as it is organized on weekends.
The whole event is intentionally kept on weekend to attract the most crowd possible because spreading awareness to general public is one of our motto. It is not compulsory to attend the ceremony on both days, people can participate on their will.
The main agenda of the meeting is to identify sustainable approaches to reduce poisonous gas emission, which is a major cause for pollution. Prominent environment activists and professors from all over the world are attending the meet to contribute in this noble cause, it would certainly a cherry on the top if locals are encouraged to participate enthusiastically.
I look forward to hearing from you and to see your active participation.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...end it as it is organized on weekends. The whole event is intentionally kept on...
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Line 8, column 116, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...possible because spreading awareness to general public is one of our motto. It is not compulso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06849315068 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00074009344 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0400839328 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116968442789 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401537870585 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382487590021 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688756551969 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401679435754 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.