In this contemporary era, multifarious products and drugs are manufactured, while to check the safety experiments are done on animals. Whereas, some people argue that these tests should not be carried out, as it is inhumane to make animals suffer. While, others are in favor of it because of benefits to humanity.
To commence with, animals are part of every nation and its culture, so like humans they should be free as well. People have no right to be cruel to them. To illustrate, for developing a single medicine, it is tested on various animals for number of times. Individual are risking animals life for saving human race. Moreover, it is morally wrong, all living souls are similar and creatures also have a family. So, for testing cosmetics or other product people are taking them away from their family merely for making more money. Hence, it is selfishness of humans to use animals for their benefits.
Nevertheless, if drug for any fatal disease is discovered and saves thousands of lives then it seem's to be fair to test a medicine on animals. As, for safety purposes it is obligatory to check it before using. Furthermore, tests are done on only few species, which are abundant in number. For instance, most of the products are done on mice, rabbits and monkeys Thus, it will not reduce them or make them extinct, while there are immense merits to humanity.
In my opinion, nature have created a balance and humans should not disturb it. Although, it is necessary to check safety of a drug so some other method should be adopted. But, till that some strict rules should be made to test it only for pharmaceutical purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: abundant
...are done on only few species, which are abundant in number. For instance, most of the products ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79225352113 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.560018981 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0706400241 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0588235294 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302566296179 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094567766712 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680092919146 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196172546373 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106275599046 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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