Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
250 words
40 minutes
Give reasons for answer using your own ideas and experience.
One of the most vital and effective methods used to defuse conflict between countries and ensure safe expression of patriotism is organising and participating in global sporting events such as the Olympics. From my point of view, team sports like rugby or cricket help to build relationships not only among teammates, but also between competitors from different backgrounds and cultures.
Sports and competitive activities between countries help to boost trade and ensures sustainable developments in participating nations. If a country hosts a global sporting event, such as the Olympics, people and companies from different parts of the world partake in it and spend money on flight tickets, souvenirs, hotels, and so on. Investors also take advantage of such events to look for opportunities to invest and start-up companies in such countries. Small businesses also thrive and the country’s economy is improved. For instance, since the award for hosting the 2020 World Cup event was given to Qatar, several companies have opened up business in the country and there has been a boom in the construction and infrastructural development as the government builds stadiums and develops locations for the event to hold.
In addition, sports help to initiate and cement peace and build communication between countries. Nations that have been in conflict on political or border issues come together in the spirit of sportsmanship and participate in sporting events. A very good example can be seen in the participation of North Korea in the Winter Olympics recently held in South Korea, even though both countries have been in conflict for some time.
To conclude, when people of different backgrounds and cultures come together in the spirit of sportsmanship, negative emotions are put aside, political and personal preferences cease to matter and everyone, athletes and viewers alike, enjoy the games as one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38666666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02055182596 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0710990677 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.909090909 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118022989611 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432092410799 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341644099681 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638960690551 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377144058047 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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