Popular events like the football World Cup and other international
sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and
releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Tremendous sports events especially the football World Cup or other sports performance in the world-class are entertaining ways to spread the peace message and love for every person no matter what their nationality is. We can see numerous advantages in these exhibitions which in this essay I would like to talk about some of them.
Firstly, it is generally believed that sports matches can gather all nations closer which can reduce the world political and economic tensions. Most conflicts and wars between nations or some civil wars in countries have been stopped because of the world cups. Take the football World cup 2016 in South Africa for example, almost all of the hostilities in Africa continent were suspended and postponed to after matches; therefore these events can release the anger and convert it into peaceful ways.
Secondly, sports events are the best way to acquaint with other nationalities and how people feel proud of their national team. Most fans who support their national team, always try to introduce their country in different ways. For example, wearing traditional dress or singing iconic slogans. These features are the beauty of the world cups that will raise awareness about other countries and also will increase patriotic emotions between different nations.
Indeed, big sports events such as World Cups can bring peace and love for all Nations. Because people with different attitudes gather in one place just for enjoying the match and evolve the sense of humanity and friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...016 in South Africa for example, almost all of the hostilities in Africa continent were su...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21632653061 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47001172754 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3823398155 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191881317168 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706003745617 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597596170387 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122617341986 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427553819471 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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