large companies have been investing millions of dollars on marketing to attract consumers. Due to which, it creates an obstacle in the way of domestic business growth. Customers tendency also be affected by these type of advertisement. So I would discuss its problems and some solution to resolve it.
When a company spend huge money on marketing .it is affects customer behaviour in several ways. firstly nowadays life of every person has become very hectic. so he receives information about any products through advertisement and it put might be the negative effect on customers attitude because sometimes this type of promotions attract the customers and he does not pay attention to the quality of the product. Secondly, people are becoming habituated with the unnecessary shopping because in Modern era every person depends on technology and with the help of this techniques multinational companies have captured all market. These companies are using all the type of communication to influence the tendency of the consumer to purchase the product which they might be not needed. For instance, companies offer the big discount with the attractive quantity so a consumer buy some things as he has already.
Globalisation has transferred the world into a small village. so multi-branded companies are being set up everywhere. In the environment of cut-throat competition, it has become very difficult for a local company to grow up. So the government should provide some more facilities to small entrepreneurs, such as subsidies for the local market to help them in production and advertisement. For example in India, if the government provides easily loan to the local textile factory, it is very useful for employment as well as economic growth. Media can also play a vital role to promote local market such as to encourage people to buy regional products.
To conclude, it is reality that if a big firm spends lots of money on advertising, it is recovering from the customers. Moreover some essential action are required to promote local products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21084337349 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99591462284 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3655039956 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233702242817 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636169932154 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560828070686 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126657284188 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418289979199 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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