Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like. Write- Who your family consists of
What kind of presents each member would like.
How you feel about your friend coming to visit
Dear Hannah,
It was a very pleasant surprise to hear from you after such a long time. My joy knew no bounds when I read that you are coming to visit me.
My parents and my younger sister too are very excited about your visit. It is very generous of you to ask what they would like as a present from you. Believe me Hannah, your presence here would be the biggest gift for them. As far as material things are concerned, nowadays everything is available in India. So, please don’t bother yourself for this.
It would be great if you send me your detailed itinerary so that I can plan the best for your holiday. You know, India has a rich historical background and I would like you to visit as much as possible. There is the Taj Mahal at Agra which is a must-see. Then the Golden Temple at Amritsar, the temples of South India, the beaches of Goa and the back-waters of Kerala are all awaiting you. Fortunately, there is a summer break going on in my college, so I shall be completely at your disposal. I am really excited about your visit. We shall have a great holiday together and also revive some of the nostalgic memories of the great time we had four years ago when we were both studying at Leeds University.
Waiting eagerly for you.
Yours lovingly,
Ajay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rents and my younger sister too are very excited about your visit. It is very gen...
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...about your visit. It is very generous of you to ask what they would like as a pre...
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...uld be the biggest gift for them. As far as material things are concerned, nowada...
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... material things are concerned, nowadays everything is available in India. So, pl...
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...vailable in India. So, please don't bother yourself for this. It would be...
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...nd and I would like you to visit as much as possible. There is the Taj Mahal at A...
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...hes of Goa and the back-waters of Kerala are all awaiting you. Fortunately, there...
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... great holiday together and also revive some of the nostalgic memories of the great time we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45957446809 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37587847993 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625531914894 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5889799684 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304990054185 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104917967462 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964169096941 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172089502928 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066375421635 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.