Your neighbors have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter:
• describe the problem with the dog
• explain why it is important for you to sleep
• outline what your neighbors could do about the situations
Dear Kanwal,
Iam writing to you to bring your attention a problem, that I have been having with your dog at night time. I am hoping that you would resolve the issue.
As you aware, Iam working in a construction company and my job timing is very tough 9:00am to 6:30 pm. Iam working as a town planner, so I need more concentration on new ideas related to planning of new urban areas. Therefore, for healthy sleeping silent environment is essential. I have been suffering a problem for last two months, just because of your pet animal.it has started digging holes in the garden and most of the time making loud noises. I was awoken by your dog’s barking several times at whole night, due to this issue I had even consult a doctor, he had been prescribed me some sleeping pills.
I have respect you, and I hope you can feel my stress regarding this. I strongly recommend you away your dog from here to another place.
Iam looking forward to here positive response from your side.
Your sincerely,
Erum Panhwar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 550, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'consulted'.
Suggestion: consulted
...ole night, due to this issue I had even consult a doctor, he had been prescribed me som...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...en prescribed me some sleeping pills. I have respect you, and I hope you can fe...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you can feel my stress regarding this. I strongly recommend you away your dog fr...
^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r side. Your sincerely, Erum Panhwar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67032967033 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47540735823 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.039238702 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2727272727 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359650726242 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130689843943 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992653999275 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223602085471 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099750674385 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.