A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Here the author is trying to say that nation must enforce the same national curriculum throughout the whole nation.At first it seems a good decision to implement this,but after careful consideration of this i believe that in some of the cases this may be good,but in some cases it may not be that much favourable.
If there is same national curriculum throughout the nation then there will be equality in system.Every student no matter from where he/she is they will learn the same things that others are learning.For an instance if we applied this kind of policy then students from rural area will also get the same opportunity to learn the things.As all we know that computer is the future, so learning a computer is must for any student.If there is no same curriculum in nation then it may be possible that schools from rural area may not pay that much attention on the education in computer field because of the limited resources, But if the same curriculum is there then they must have to teach this to their students.
By this we can also have a one common entrance test for further education.If there is same curriculum for all students then students from rural area will also be able to compete with student from cities.For an instance after the implementation of JEE and NEET as single entrance exam to take admission in engineering and medical colleges, students from state board was not able to perform well with compare to students from central board.Students from state board argues that they don't have the simillar practice as a central board student,they believed that test was conducted by central board,so student from their board will obviously perform well because they were used to with this levels of tests.
This implementation is seems to be good solution for many problems but there are some other subjects like social science which does not need this kind of centralized syllabus.For some state it is mandatory for their student to learn about the history of that state, but this may not have that much impact on national level.In this type of case it may not be good practice to do this.
In conclusion i would like to say that we must focus on having a same national curriculum in only some of the subjects like maths and science.Where as we also have to consider the subjects like social science in which this kind of change may not be effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75180722892 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6160907676 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424096385542 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 23.0359550562 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.144664288 60.3974514979 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.4 118.986275619 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 23.4991977007 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.21951772744 307% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211343123411 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127535788741 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654745111556 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127535788741 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654745111556 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.4 14.1392134831 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 48.8420337079 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 12.1743820225 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 11.2143820225 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 35.0 11.7820224719 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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