Each of students has their own studying preferences. Someone loves to study alone. However, others would like to study in a group. Each way of studies has pros and cons. In my opinion, I prefer complete a project by working alone due to the fact that I can save time and do not need to depend on others and I can also do more research to understand the project deeply . I will explore my ideas in the following essay.
First of all, working alone will help me to save more time than working with a group. We all know that when we work together we usually have to wait each other. Someone will be late or absence in the last minute. Moreover, we tend to talk and joke each other too much. It adverse effect our project. My own experience is a compelling example of this case. When I was in nursing college, my biology teacher often assigned us to work together. There were fifteen members in our group. We frequently had to wait at least thirty minutes to begin our job. During the time we work together, someone had phone call, other would like to use restroom. It took us a lot of time to finish our project and sometimes we needed to ask for extension. Finally, we worked separately and we just met each other one time to collect the information and went over the project. This point demonstrates that we are able to work faster when we work alone.
Secondly, we can work independently. It is a prerequisite for all students. They need to know how to deal with puzzle questions. Moreover, if we work alone we can schedule ourselves. In other words, we can work on our project whenever we are available. To be more specific, if I have to finish a paper and tonight I have some important thing to do, I can work on it tomorrow. However, if I have to work with a group, I have to follow the time of the group. Sometimes there is some things happen intentionally, thus, I cannot attend with the group. This is not convenient for both myself and my group as well.
Last but not least, working alone will give students a chance to comprehend their project better. In fact, when students perform their projects by themselves, they tend to do more research and collect more information from various sources. It is because sometime they do not understand their subject at first. Hence, they need to get more information. Or in some cases students would like to have good grade, thus, they try their best to complete their paper. Therefore, they can probably understand their topics more deeply, carefully and widely.
In conclusion, students have their own ideas about the issue of whether working together or working alone to complete a project is more effective. In my view, for two reasons, which I have just mentioned above, I Strongly believe that working by myself is more beneficial because I can save time and work independently as well as I can enlarge my knowledge by doing more research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...esearch to understand the project deeply . I will explore my ideas in the followin...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some things'?
Suggestion: there are some things
...follow the time of the group. Sometimes there is some things happen intentionally, thus, I cannot at...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge my knowledge by doing more research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56046065259 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54761038968 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452975047985 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5708618763 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4722222222 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88709677419 389% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28142726416 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07256294696 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631984147862 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169123067844 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377503020293 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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