Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.
What the problems would be
What are the main causes
Your suggestions.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Roxie Davis- one of the “shahrak” area dwellers. I am writing to you to lodge a complaint about the problem which has arisen recently concerning the standards of cleanliness in streets of our area.
To begin with, I would like to point out that the vast amount of disposal waste in the area has caused many troubles. On the one hand, all residents have been being annoyed by the horrible smell of rubbish, not only when they are walking in the streets but also at their homes if they opened windows. One the other hand, too many insects –some toxic- and a substantial number of mice have gathered around litter. This in-turn leads local people to suffer from infectious diseases.
The reasons for this problem are twofold. One of them is the considerably small number of bins. To be more precise, one bin for each two streets in such a crowded area sounds unreasonable. The other cause is the fact that authorities have shirked the responsibilities for controlling the efficiency of garbage collectors.
At last, I would like to offer some suggestions to overcome this issue. I think every street should be equipped with at least two bins. Furthermore, it would be for more practical if you put extra separated ones for paper, plastic and glass. I would also ask you to hire more employees to assume the responsibility of collecting garbage at certain hours of the day and prevent bins from getting overloaded.
Your sincere attention and prompt action is deeply appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Roxie Davis.
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| 2018-08-16 | Roxana Davarpanah | 96 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, at least, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96577946768 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84398954641 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9039169978 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165219303257 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516844625273 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376433449928 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821206258464 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143263752213 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.