The diagram below gives information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...o begin with, meat was refrigerated and than delivered for defrost from where it tra...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...e it transferred for defrosted beef and than some amount of salt and pepper was drpp...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ved from it and cutted into small pieces,and the waste material was thrown into the ...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ef pieces was inspected very gently and than after tested,the meat was putted into t...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...pected very gently and than after tested,the meat was putted into the container from...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...om where it delivered to the stores and than potatoes were added into it and than it...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...nd than potatoes were added into it and than it was cleaned and peeled by different ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore, meal was boiled, chilled and stored than potatoes were putted on moving chai...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , like
...chain from where different type of meals,like prepared peas and carrots, prepared gra...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... In crux it is to be said that after many different types of manufacturing steps, feozen me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, even so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85784313725 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3853718869 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7087932507 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.166666667 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581045527739 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544482826901 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088677659286 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773250880663 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100924148462 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.