The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought over the internet.
The presented line graph and pie chart illustrates the information about the expenditure of money on books and comparison of books bought in four provinces of United Kingdom respectively. The data is about UK from 1997 to 2002. The data is calibrated in million pounds.
In general, from the layout it is clear that the trend of expenditure had increased over time. Moreover, majority the books were bought by the people of England only.
Now, turning to the details in year 1997 nearly about 11 million pounds was spent on books. By the time the expenditure increased to about 16 and 19 million lbs in the year 1998 and 1999 respectively. Furthermore, by 2000 the trend rose about 22 millions. After that, it increased slightly in 2001 and reached to the peak level of 24 millions in 2002.
In addition to this, from the pie chart it is clear that 81 percent of books were bought by England only. Whereas, from the rest of 20% only one percent in Northern Ireland , 10% in Whales and eight percent in Scotland.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...The data is about UK from 1997 to 2002. The data is calibrated in million pounds. ...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...1997 to 2002. The data is calibrated in million pounds. In general, from the layout ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...20% only one percent in Northern Ireland , 10% in Whales and eight percent in Scot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69832402235 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58090686521 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5223547999 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14038578998 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505510042694 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653798539559 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931659921623 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637818150951 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.