Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well. I'm writing to thank you for inviting me to spend my next holiday with you in Japan.
As you know, my annual thirty days holiday will commence from 12th July and I usually love to travel overseas, however currently I am facing some financial issues because I need to clear my long pending debts. As a result, It will be difficult for me manage the expenses which will occur for the trip, so I would prefer to stay at stay at home and spend most of my time with my family.
I also have some exciting news to share - I'm sure you will be overjoyed. My brother, Ramesh, is getting engaged by the end of next month. Although the dates for the engagement ceremony are yet to be finalized, I will keep you updated once we decide on the dates and will send you an invite accordingly.
Anyway, stay in touch.
Warm wishes,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. Im writing to thank you for inviting me to...
^^
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'stay at'.
Suggestion: stay at
...ccur for the trip, so I would prefer to stay at stay at home and spend most of my time with my ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...also have some exciting news to share - Im sure you will be overjoyed. My brother,...
^^
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: AN_INVITE[1]
Message: Use only in informal register. In other registers, 'invitation' should be used.
Suggestion: invitation
...ecide on the dates and will send you an invite accordingly. Anyway, stay in touch. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, anyway, however, if, so, well, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42592592593 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2519265467 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4396133509 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169311901954 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743266012919 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791054016019 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121324736146 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877020156384 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.