In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
Some people think new countryside has a negative influence on cities and should protect cities from getting expanding too much. Because new residential areas are harmful to cities
Making new residential areas around the cities and creating new countryside negatively affects cities, owing to fact that cities are bigger than before they face a dearth of facilities such as fresh water, electricity and public transportation; in addition, the new countryside needs some necessary areas for living and educating people, for instance, hospitals, schools, and parks.
Environment is another object in new countryside, because new residential areas destroy environment, new vicinity need new lands, that lands maybe was farm in near the city, when the new countryside is relocated to farm areas, it is destroying agriculture market in that city; moreover, building companies might destroy some trees and plants in that area to building new residential buildings.
New residential areas in the countryside makes new neighborhood which might majority of poor people or some ethics group came together and establish a new society that was not suitable for city or they create new gangs against current law; therefore, it makes a lots of problems for the city, for instance, the Paris countryside with wide range countryside nowadays has many problems.
In my opinion, when cities convert to big cities with the big countryside that happened makes big problems for people who live in that areas and so people are not in that areas but related to the city, it is kind of problem not only for the citizen but also for municipality and government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cities from getting expanding too much. Because new residential areas are harmful to ci...
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Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...gainst current law; therefore, it makes a lots of problems for the city, for instance,...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27756653992 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82001139257 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.517690892 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.6 106.682146367 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.4 7.06120827912 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270361252404 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164053135857 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042606343321 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164684617079 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042276081438 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 13.0946893788 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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