In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays many people think plastic is the most dangerous thing for the environment because most rubbish sources include plastic products; therefore, people should change their minds about using plastic bags especially in shopping. I think plastic bags should replace by paper ones or reusable bags.
It might be a good idea to use the paper bag instead of plastic ones. In that in the current century, many companies using plastic material in their products because plastic is really flexible and useful to produce different and colorful bags; but many people put their shopping bags on bins or let into nature. In theory, plastic takes hundreds of years to recycle to nature; moreover, some animals nourish from plastics in the environment and its hurt their bodies.
In recent years, some shopping malls have good ideas to reduce using plastic bags to protect the environment such as give an extra cost from people who ask plastic bags it encourages customers to use reusable bags instead of plastic bags. In some cases, some shopping centers offer many reusable bags as a gift to their customers which encouraging people to use the classified bag; moreover, it has great deals for shopping malls because they advertise with their customer bags in wide ranges.
In my opinion, although many people using the plastic bag in their routine life, shopping malls have a great responsibility to encourage people about reduce plastic bags and replace customers attitudes with the paper bags or the reusable ones to protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...vironment and its hurt their bodies. In recent years, some shopping malls have ...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reusable bags instead of plastic bags. In some cases, some shopping centers offer...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... their customer bags in wide ranges. In my opinion, although many people using ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, as to, i think, such as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1593625498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45055223706 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509960159363 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4548255437 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.875 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246466844046 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139471974467 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468884201315 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184202983098 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406383601795 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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