The given tabular chart depicts the information about the people aged 30-50 ,in eight different countries are spending their favorite time in these 7 different activities(tv,sport,reading,hobbies,music,beach and sleep).the data is calibrated in per centum .
It can bee seen that ,Canadians ,Australians ,and Americans like watching tv near about 60%.The percentage of chinese and koreans in the same activity is 15% and 22%. Apart from all this the highest percentage of Japanese ,koreans ,chinese ,and french in reading is 62%,60%,60%,and 30 compared with other pastime activities whereas both australians and americans just like reading 15%.
As far as trend is concern that 20% of people in UK are like sleeping but only 2% people in canada and usa like to sleep Furthermore 4% of population like to sleep in australia and korea.
Overall,only reading is a activity in which all countries are participating .
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- The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 22
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- The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e time in these 7 different activitiestv,sport,reading,hobbies,music,beach and sleep.t...
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...0%.The percentage of chinese and koreans in the same activity is 15% and 22%. Apa...
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...s and americans just like reading 15%. As far as trend is concern that 20% of p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42253521127 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.48032392458 2.65546596893 169% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69014084507 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8210665234 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712368940453 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349331008117 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491481453312 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391297888594 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541606469988 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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