The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030
The given tabular representation reveals the information about the energy consume by USA a report from 2008 till 1980 to until 2030.the data calibrated in quadrillion billion.it is clear,and coherent representation.
Overall,it is evident that the data amount will either the maximum of petrol,and oil or minimum data ratio of hydropower .
Looking at the details, this will all the process based upon US energy consume by fix fuels like petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear solar ,and hydropower.In first step petrol,and oil will have ratio 35 to 45. However, In coal,and natural gas trend is fluctuating in coming days the amount of natural gas may be incline.
On flip side, In another three fuels shall have data is differ from first ones. Because in this tend hydropower, and solar files fluctuating . afterthat, they can achieve separate position .as well as, nuclear is differ from other this will have trend from 5 to 10 . because change is takes place suddenly,and this could achieve a good path for follow the trends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...amount will either the maximum of petrol,and oil or minimum data ratio of hydropower...
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...nd oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear solar ,and hydropower.In first step petrol,and ...
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...ural gas, nuclear solar ,and hydropower.In first step petrol,and oil will have rat...
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...lar ,and hydropower.In first step petrol,and oil will have ratio 35 to 45. However, ...
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...dropower, and solar files fluctuating . afterthat, they can achieve separate position .as...
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...that, they can achieve separate position .as well as, nuclear is differ from other...
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...parate position .as well as, nuclear is differ from other this will have trend from 5 ...
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...ear is differ from other this will have trend from 5 to 10 . because change is takes ...
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... other this will have trend from 5 to 10 . because change is takes place suddenly,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73144477111 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1617946527 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108126756978 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478312229189 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932813912717 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837298192734 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119821700685 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.