Lecturer casts doubt on working on project as a group is beneficial. The points made in the passage that working as a group has numerous benefits such as having more knowledge, and skills. In addition, when working in a group members are more quicker to get a solution , and more likely to choose risky option that working alone.
According to the passage working as a group has advantages such as sharing experiences, ,knowledge and skills in order to finish the project. In addition, it has more man force, creative ideas and are finished quicker compared to a project done alone. When project fails it is better to handle the responsibilities together rather than alone. By contrast, professor points out that when working as a group there is always at least one free rider who does not do anything and takes credit of the ones who worked hard to finish the project. When the project is successfully done all group members are praised including the free rider and members who worked hard are not happy about this.
Another reason professor mentioned is some projects go much slower because group members are slow in getting an unanimous decision. While working as a group having same opinion is very important. For some cases very opposite people are assigned in the same groups which slows down their progress when different opinions are held withing the group.
Lastly, the passage indicates that when working as a group people share their responsibilities and rewards is a good character of teamwork. However, the professor argues that there are some cases when someone in the group gets too influential. While the group is discussing a solution and is almost done, an influential intrudes and adds creative ideas but other teammates disagree and tell why this idea will not work. Unfortunately the rest of the group follows the influential ignoring others suggestion. As a result, when the project fails all group members are scolded for one person's mistake.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...s. In addition, when working in a group members are more quicker to get a solution , an...
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Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'quicker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: quicker
...on, when working in a group members are more quicker to get a solution , and more likely to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mbers are more quicker to get a solution , and more likely to choose risky option ...
^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... advantages such as sharing experiences, ,knowledge and skills in order to finish ...
^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...icker compared to a project done alone. When project fails it is better to handle th...
^^^^
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cause group members are slow in getting an unanimous decision. While working as a...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... slow in getting an unanimous decision. While working as a group having same opinion ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...scussing a solution and is almost done, an influential intrudes and adds creative ideas but ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, so, while, at least, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 329.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01215805471 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6239712226 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507598784195 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.070623002 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322012454022 0.272083759551 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125851471579 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435365431147 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220454156211 0.162205337803 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225209994422 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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