The cost of international travel is decreasing and tourism is increasing in many countries. what are the advantages and disadvantages of the trend of tourism for countries? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.
"Globalisation is a world in which everyone has freedom to move freely anywhere". People want to explore more and for this most of people travel a lot. Here is a topic that, tourism is increasing day by day in many countries because of cheaper prices of travelling; is it good or bad. For this, I shall explicate some Merits and demerits and also provide reason for this trend in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are lots of advantages of tourism. People travel because they want to enhance their knowledge also, because of cheaper price they do not hesitate to find out more about traditions and culture of others countries. Moreover, it increases our country budget as well as name in all over the world because when lots of people attracted towards history of country then they have to pay to government and It helped country to develop. For instance, Punjab is a land which is full of incarnations about 85% tourist attract towards its monuments and history as well as visit many places in Punjab and in return they have to pay money to government for permission.
probing ahead, every coin has two sides. Likewise, there are some demerits of tourism for countries because some people alter their intentions after reaching to particular country. it directly affects the population of that country also, sometimes they may harm the life of person's who live in that country. The best epitome of this could be in last few years, in America 87% of people change their intentions and migrate over there and commits some serious crimes which had been cured by government of that country and almost 50 people die in that case.
In conclusion, pencil has two sides: sharp and a plane. Like this, tourism increase the popularity of particular country whereas, it may harm life of dwellers by threating them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88102893891 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65669975285 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7749550996 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181503753796 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651784399215 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500266028676 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113644996104 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408309526453 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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