Human being is a social animal. We live in societies to fulfill our needs and demands. So I agreed with the statement that it is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. We gain self esteem from social group and build our identity according to group. In support of statement I have some examples to share.
Human behavior directed with social group because human needs social acceptance. When a child born he or she get name to make identity. The name to a child is given by society. As the child grow the social group get large with age and as well as the identity of the child also developed. The child assimilate the social groups norms and identify the group with himself.
However, Social group has strong influence on identity. It can also be understood as, when we go another country the people met us and identify firstly our social group. The way of talking, behaving, posture and gestures reflect social groups and represent our identity. It is clear in a research that 70% of communication depends on non verbal clues and rest 30% is verbal. The non-verbal communication represent our identity which we learn from social groups. People have mental image for specific social groups like In India people belongs to Delhi are very audacious, so the self identity will be assume related to social group about the person.
Moreover, we act or behave like our social group. If we ask a child talk about a growing child then we see that the child build his identity according to social group. For example a child from well mannered and educated family than he can identify different from a child belongs to poor and uneducated family. The self identity represents ourselves which is primary depends on social group.
conclusively, I explain few examples in support of statement which tells us that social group plays vital role in self identity on an individual. However, self identity has some influence of intrinsic factors but social group mold personality according to demands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...acceptance. When a child born he or she get name to make identity. The name to a ch...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assimilates'.
Suggestion: assimilates
... of the child also developed. The child assimilate the social groups norms and identify th...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... represent our identity. It is clear in a research that 70% of communication depends on no...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...we act or behave like our social group. If we ask a child talk about a growing chi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conclusively
...is primary depends on social group. conclusively, I explain few examples in support of s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9273255814 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56662012623 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473837209302 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1307288068 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0454545455 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246806240659 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927778303743 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909939196552 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164700926251 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744971859206 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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